Monday 19 January 2015

My Script #1

I have come up with a script and monologue for my film opening. Like I have said before the monologue will run over flashbacks in the girls life which the story will be about. The script you will see below is one I am very happy with, during filming the actors  may slip up with their exact lines however as long as it delivers the message I am aiming for and the acting is to a good standard, I shall keep it.
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Monologue         
Curiosity is the lust of the mind. It has the power to invade your thoughts making you wonder where you're going to be in a few years or who you may meet that will have the power to influence your life and the way you live it.
Life unfolds in mysterious ways, ways in which you would never expect, there are dreams and wishes, fears and nightmares, you can go for them, or you can hide from them. My story's a little more complex that that..but the real question, how do you separate what's in your head from reality? and how do you know when to stop?.

Scene 1
TEACHER: *places bad test paper on the desk* How about you come and see me at the end of the lesson?
HAZEL: *sighs and nods*
TEACHER: Hazel, I know you're trying hard but look, here's a list of some books that could help you leading up to the exam, you might find them in the library.
HAZEL: Ok, thanks
TEACHER: Alright, have a nice weekend.
Scene 2
*Hazel walking up into the library then looking through books*
LIBRARIAN: Oh hello there Hazel, can I help you with anything?
HAZEL: Oh I was just looking for some books
LIBRARIAN: Alright, we have a box full of old ones over there, you can have a rummage if you like
*Hazel walks up to and rummages through the box*
HAZEL: Umm, could I take this?
LIBRARIAN: of course! Take as many as you like they'll all be thrown out by tomorrow
HAZEL: thanks *walks out putting book into bag, leaving teachers list in the library*
Scene 3
*little montage of Hazel reading the book*
HAZEL: *reads passage from book* ..and on her 18th birthday she was given her grandmothers old engagement ring...
*Hazel immediately stands and rummages through her belongings to find the engagement ring her grandmother gave her*.
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Above is the full script along with some directions, I may film some extra scenes just in case the film opening is under 2 minutes, if I do it will all be posted on here.

1 comment:

  1. Well done Aisha, you've clearly thought about this a lot and it's great to see you ideas developing and evolving as you record them on here. Remember, you are not making a short film, you are making the opening to a much longer film.

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