There is another change I would like to make to my film. I have decided to just have one character for the entire opening being Hazel.
In the opening, the only important character in my storyline is the Hazel, the teacher and librarian aren't relevant enough to the storyline to make them have a part in the opening and as the opening is only going to last around two minutes I want the focus to be on her (Hazel).
Having looked at all the clips I have filmed, I found that I had too much material and had to cut it down in order for all the most important shots to be featured. Therefore I decided a teacher wasn't needed to deliver a bad grade and instead a short aftermath of Hazel getting the bad grade could be shown instead.
Also, everything in a film's opening two minutes is usually significant so if I included a librarian it could have been difficult to show whether or not the librarian knew about the evil book, usually the audience would expect the worst of characters, most of them would assume the librarian was the culprit of it all, so to avoid unnecessary confusion, I thought it would be best to remove this character all together.
Everything else still stands, Hazel will fail a test and go to the library to find some books, she will come across a mysterious book and decide to pick it up along with some others and that it where it will all begin. She will become attached to this book and as she realises the main character is her, even more so.